Wow. I have always believed that the greatest danger the Uber Rich have is from their "Head of Security". You know they day, when he says, "You know you have a beautiful daughter".
Brother, this would be fine writing if you had taken the trouble to write it well. I don't disagree with a single thing you said, but your sentence construction disagrees with itself to a distracting and disappointing degree.
It matters because you cannot truly know what you think, or why, until you have taken the trouble to articulate it.
This is a meandering think-aloud stroll through your impressions on the subject, not an articulation of your thoughts. Cross out all the wrong words, as Twain might say, and put an edge on that talent.
Wow. I have always believed that the greatest danger the Uber Rich have is from their "Head of Security". You know they day, when he says, "You know you have a beautiful daughter".
I was born in Perth
Brother, this would be fine writing if you had taken the trouble to write it well. I don't disagree with a single thing you said, but your sentence construction disagrees with itself to a distracting and disappointing degree.
It matters because you cannot truly know what you think, or why, until you have taken the trouble to articulate it.
This is a meandering think-aloud stroll through your impressions on the subject, not an articulation of your thoughts. Cross out all the wrong words, as Twain might say, and put an edge on that talent.